I enjoyed reading this little item through. It was a very loving and positive item. There was a lot said in just a few lines. I felt humbled and warm by the care and respect in each line written. Nice writing and thank you for sharing it here. Write on!!
I liked the innocent theme to this poem. You also wrote this out very well. Good flowing lines, good rhythm and good rhymes. Your gratitude was very evident, enrolling God into your thanks. Fact or fiction this was a nice read and was fun to experience. Good work and write on!
I thought your poem here was very simple and easy to follow. I liked the warming feel of the last line. There was good imagery coming from each word and line. You told a mini story here and it was inviting to me. I enjoyed this little piece very much. Write on!
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I find this subject you wrote of to be very interesting indeed. Your authors notes were so correct and fact filled truth. The poem had good rhymes, good flow, good rhythm. The picture above the writing was a superb touch and made the writing so much more thrilling. I too have written a poem on the same picture and I called it Earthrise. A beautiful thought it is to know how big the universe is and indeed other univereses. A great poem, write on!
I enjoyed the depth of your writing here. You were not affraid to express your inner self. I really liked how you ended the poem, it made me smile and caught me off guard. A good length for a poem and you managed to say a lot in just a few lines. A good read and it helped getting to know you better. write on!
I thought this was very deep and expressive from you. I am pleased the love is still there even after seperation. I enjoyed reading this through. Although the theme of this writing was dark, there was a positive vibe coming from each word and line. It was like you are both still in contact, quite beautiful to me. Nice work and write on!
You described a condition very well here in this item. I liked the dark tone to this poem. My favourite line was this; "Worthless brain has lost all human thought"..... I liked it because I too suffer from the same happening. Like a fuzz in the mind. You expressed yourself very well here. Good work and write on!
I liked this minute poem from you. I have had similar thoughts on the same subject and idea. Great philosophy, great thinking. I loved the unique feeling this gave me as I read it through. I also smiled at the cleverness of this item. Great work and write on!!
I related so well to all of this little piece from you. Nicely written and presented. I enjoyed the way you wrote this out. My favourite poet; "Novalis" would have been proud of this piece from you. There was a reality here in stating that the morning light will clear the soul of darkness. So true. Write on!!
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I thought you expressed yourself very well here. You wrote of a love that has little reward or return. This must be very annoying. Good word crafting, good flowing lines. A sad theme but was still very effective. I enjoyed reading this through. Nice work and write on!
I liked the flowing lines here from you. I couldn't help but feel sad as I read this through. To me there was an air of emotions and feelings. I like how you said in the preview, that you're going home to heaven, I thought this set up the poem very well. A lovely poem to read through. Good work and write on!!
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I almost cried at the emotions in this poem from you. I think you spoke for all animal lovers here and those who have lost their pets. A simple yet effective item. A simple and inviting title, matching the items words. Nice emotional writing. Good work.
I liked this little piece from you. The theme gave me good imagery of a mother elephant. A sweet and effective poem. The title was simple and matched the writing well. I enjoyed reading this through. I am not familiar with the form you used but it worked anyway. Good work and write on!!
I liked this item from you here. It was well written and displayed. The romantic power here was inviting and strong. Nice imagery came from the words and lines. A nice poetic sway in this piece. I liked the length, it kept my attention levels up high. Good work and write on!!
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Nice expressive tone to this writing. A deep and powerful poem. A good length for a poem, keeping my attention levels up high. I liked the title, so simple and effective. It seems as though you are running from something here. Good work and write on!!
I liked this romantic acrostic from you. It was sweetly written and displayed. A true love that has lasted many decades. I enjoyed reading this through. The title was simple yet effective. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Great work and write on!!
Nicely written and displayed on the page. This was a very nice accolade for your friend indeed. I enjoyed the positivity that came along with the poem. Birthdays are special and writing a poem for her is the best way to celebrate and show respect. Good work and write on!!
I liked this item from you. It was a good read through out. A loving piece and a great feeling came over me as I read this through. Good presentation, it looks good on the page. A powerful piece to write. Nice work, good theme and well written. Write on!!
I really liked this form and the way you executed this writing. It was a lovely read. The theme was a little sad but I still enjoyed the read. Nice length for a poem, keeping my attention levels up high. You did a fine job here. Good work and write on!!
I thought this was a lovely little poem from you. Written very well with a lot of care. There was a sweetness about this poem here. There was plenty of rewarding, loving quotes here. I really enjoyed reading this acrostic through. Nice work and write on!!
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