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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
This article is very informative. As I read it, I did not see any typos or other grammatical errors. While I was reading it, I imagined making a trip to that part of the world. However, what has stopped me is the fact that the thought of this is quite dangerous. How was the language barrier dealt with? It really seemed like it ws a life changing experience. Well done. Write ON!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This piece is quite informative. As I was reading it, it reminded me of a class I took in high school. I do not remember the name of the class but it was about the Holocaust and we viewed a picture of Hitler after he committed suicide. I would suggest that you put spaces in between the paragraphs. It would make it easier to read. Even though the Holocaust was a black hole in the world's history, it needs to be remembered so that nothing like it will ever happen again. Write On!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem is so true. The part about finding your one true love once is debatable. Losing a love is like a death to the person who feels the pain. When others interfere out of the goodness of their hearts, it just complicates the situation. I did not see any typos or other grammatical mistakes. I really like the way this poem flows. It tells a story very well.

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Review of Ever Thankful  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
When I first started reading thi story, I thought it was about four homeless human siblings. You had me going until I read the end. I know what it is like to spoil the four legged members of the family. We have one dog, a Cocker Spaniel named Shadow. Is she spoiled? Most definitely. I did not see any typos or other grammatical mistakes. I loved this. Write ON!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
I think this is a great group to surprise many members of Writing.com. I read what some of the packages were and they seemed quite interesting. I am sure that anyone would enjoy these themed packages that would hold special and cherished memories of their favorite author. Is there anything else that this group does? Write ON! You Merit Badge is on the way.

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Review of Life Changing  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
When I first read this story, I thought that it was going to be about a lady who was down on her luck and was receiving help from a local organization during the holidays, or maybe toys for her children. What I did not expect was this horror story. Although, I usually do not read this genre, it kept me at the edge of my seat. I guess that is the last time she will be seeking help from someplace else. I did not see any typos or other grammatical errors. You may have a career in writing horror stories. Write ON!

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Review of Follow the Leader  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a great contest. I was just wondering if you will be starting this back up again. If you are, I would like to be involved. I love this activity because it allows each participant to get to know the other participants through their journals. The most ingenious aspect of this is that the leader writes an entry. The followers read that entry then write one of their own along the same lines. When someone becomes the leader, it can become pretty interesting to read the followers entries to your leading entry. Write On!

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Review of Stormy Heart  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I liked this poem. It looks like you did this following a prompt of some kind. Was it a challenge or contest? Did you win? I did not see any typos or other grammatical mistakes. I liked how the poem explains about broken heart and the metaphor of burning emotions. It would be nice if, after being burned in a relationship, we could just call it quits regarding love and everything that accompanies it. The truth of the matter is humans are not like that. They keep going back and getting more and more hurt. Write On!

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Review of Cliche Cache  
Rated: E | (4.0)
When I saw the title of this poem, I expected it to be full of cliche's. I was surprised that it was not. THe ones you used, I never heard so that threw me off. I was lost in the poem and was not sure where it was going. I did not see any typos or other grammatical mistakes. Was this a poem that you were to write for a contest or challenge? I did see one spot where y9ou needed to capitalize a word though. This could be more of a dialogue than a poem. This is just my honest opinion. Write On!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
I liked this story. However, it has some typographical errors. You should reread it and spell check. I thought that the monster was either the family pet or maybe an adult visitor. The one thing the parents should have done was call the police. Write ON!

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Review of "Shiny Pearl"  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem is very thought ful and inspiring. Its message is quite positive. The comparison between the pearl and life is very good. Life is not on a disk, unless it is "A Wonderful Life". I did not see any typos or other grammatical mistakes. Write On!

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Review of Scythe  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I liked this poem. Its imagery was quite vivid. I have never been in a wheat field, but I have seethe car. I guess this is another process that has to occur to make the food chain keep going. Are you a farmer? I almost felt the wheat's pain as it is being cut to the quick.Nice work. Write ON!

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Review of I love you  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This poem had me wondering. What was causing the separation between the two of you? There are a few spots where you have misspellings. I hope that whatever is keeping you and your loved one apart will resolve itwelf as soon as possible. Being away from a person you care about is not a good thing. It sounds as if outside forces are trying to keep you apart. Write On!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Although I am not a truck driver, the words to this song are so true. From what I have heard, the money for this occupation is very vast. The thing is that before taking on a job like this, the person has to ask themselves: Do I want to sacrifice my life for the road?Great Read! Write ON!

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Review of Traveling  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really loved this story. Its imagery was very vivid. I felt sorry for the little boy. I do not like parents who think their kids are punching bags. I do not drive, however, I have been to many rest stops. I did not see any typos or other grammatical mistakes. If I was at a stop like that alone at night, I would have shivers of fright. Write On!

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Review of The Glory Of War  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is so true. I do not know why parents are so proud when they see the boy children playing with toy guns and toy swords. Wake Up world! Wars have to stop. This pinpoints the timeline of how the thoughts of war evolve. I did not see any typos or other grammatical mistakes. Did you ever think of sending this to the President? Just My Opinion. Write ON!

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Review of The Quills  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
At last, The Academy Awards for Writing.com. It is about time. The awards cover every genre or item possible. Unlike the Golden Globes, you cannot be nominated twice in the same category. I really think this is a great idea and it looks as if it has been a great hit. I hope there will be several nominations for each category and that will make it a great race. Gentle ribbing should be allowed. Hopefully, more judges will come forward. I hope I will do this ceremony justice. I did not see any typos or other grammatical mistakes. Write On!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
This group and forum is a fantastic idea. There have been some members, who have reviewed in the past, who have given not so honest and encouraging reviews. This is the reason for the inception of this group. Giving a member an honest and encouraging review helps them along. It gives them the incentive to improve their writing and the drive to want to attempt various projects. I have been enjoying my time on here. I look forward to reading the various and different items that have been highlighted in this forum. Write On!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
This message forum/group is a great idea. I have been doing this for a few months and have won a few times. I feel that this is a great way to highlight newbie writers and their items. This is just my opinion, but there were a few items that I would not have read. This is not a mandatory task, and anyone can join in on the fun and read some interesting and great reads. The one thing I wish was there is how to submit items for review. Showcasing new talent on this site is one of the main ideas of the site. Great Idea!

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This story had me at the edge of my seat until the end. I am not a fan of horror/sci-fi/ vampires. This story was go great with all the vampire craze that is happening at the moment. The one thing that left me wondering was:Where was Conrad's mother? Did she get eaten also? I did not see any typos or other grammatical mistakes. I thought that this was just a very bad dream that the guy was having. Boy, was I wrong in my assumptions. Great Read! Write ON!]

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Review of The cursor blinks  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This poem describes writer's block to a "T". As I read it, the imagery that came to mind was me sitting in front of the screen and my mind being devoid of any ideas. The cursor {or tormentor} is like an intrusive neighbor that wants attention. I did not see any typos or other grammatical mistakes. I do, however, have a suggestion for a new title. You could call it "Writers Block". That is what happens when an author is at a loss for an idea or words. Nice read! Write On!

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Rated: E | (4.0)
As I read the lyrics of this song, I could feel your pain. I do not know what you lost. Was it a relationship, a member of your family, a friend? I do know that when something dies, the pain is unbearable. I hope that since this song's composition, you were able to move on with your life and make a new start. I did not see any typos or other grammatical mistakes. Keep your chin up and Write ON!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really like this song. Too bad there is not a sound bite to accompany it. I did not see any typos or other grammatical mistakes. I wonder how the members of your church liked the song. I think you could have expanded the song to highlight all of the times in Jesus' life from His birth until He rose again. You may have been limited on time or subject matter, however. Write On!

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Review of The Grim  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I did not expect this type of poem for this time of year. As I read it, the imagery that flashed in my mind was that of children sitting and listening to a vampire telling his stories of horror and guile. The Haunted Mansion came to my mind. The imagery was very vivid. I did not see any typos or other grammatical mistakes. It will sure give anyone a nightmare or two. Write On!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem made me cry. As I read it, it reminded me of when my Grandmother who passed away in 1987 on Christmas Eve. The anniversary is fast approaching and your poem made me think of when I was a kid, trying to pretend I was "cooking" on her stove. That was over forty years ago. I did not see any typos or other grammatical mistakes This was beautifully written and I enjoyed it. Write ON!

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