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Review of Mon Mari  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Although I do not know you personally, I feel that you followed the prompt very well. You used all five senses and the imagery of the poem was very vivid. I did not see any typos or other grammatical mistakes. I wonder what Cezanne is. Great Read! Write On!

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Review of Who Me???  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really like this poem. It explains you to a tee. I did not see any typos or other grammatical mistakes. It reminds me that I have to get back to writing poetry and trying various forms. This is well written and speaks of a true friendship. Great Read! Write ON!

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Nothing like having a nightmare come true. I have a very vivid dreams, but none of them have ever come to pass. I did not see any typos or other grammatical mistakes. What was the motivation for this type of poem? I have often wondered why people write what they do. Great Read! Write On!

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Review of The Storm  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ouch! As I read this, it reminded me of a failed relationship I had. It ended up being a failed marriage. I know that storms will come and go, but I would not want certain people to return into my life. I did not see any typos or other grammatical mistakes. Write ON!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem is very nice and to the point. I did not see any typos or other grammatical errors/ It is really something how someone else can make a person smile even if they are having the worst day in their lives. I like how the stanzas were written. First, you explained how you were having a bad day. Then, you showed how another person's presence made it brighter, then you concluded by asking the person to stay and keep you sane. Write ON!

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Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked this piece. However, I did see several misspellings and capitalization errors. I do agree with the age is just a number saying. The one thing I disagree with is what we tell children. We have to tell them something positive. IF we are negative all the time, they would grow up not knowing that the world does have some good qualities. Write On!

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Review of Poetic Flow  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a beautiful poem. As I read it, I thought of Kansaspoet and he would love this. I did not see any typos or other grammatical mistakes. The flow went very well. I love how this speaks of how the potential poet writes from the heart. I remember how I was told to write what you know. Great Read! Write On!

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Review of Scream!  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This poem deals with a subject matter that I am not familiar with. I did not see any typos or other grammatical mistakes. Is this about the devil and what would be ahead for the occupants of Hell? This is written well and conveyed the message in a clear manner. Write ON!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
This piece was not what I expected. I usually do not read the horror genre. I must admit that this surprised me. It made me think of a family that may be dealing with a member who has to deal with a devastating illness. It also made me think of a family who is trying to arrange a marriage. Great Read! Write ON!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a beautiful poem filled with a generous amount of emotion. This reminds me of the saying: If God closes a window, He will open a door somewhere else. I did not see any typos or other grammatical errors. This was heartfelt and heart warming. Thank you for sharing this with the WDC community. Write On!

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Review of Tulips  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem is very nice. As I read it, it reminded me of walking down a path in a park that is all a glow in colorful flowers. With winter knocking at the door, I long for that time of year. I did not see any typos or other grammatical mistakes. I had tulips in front of my apartment before I moved to the present place of residence. I miss them. Write On!

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Review of Kristilove  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
First of all, the rating will not blow. This is a very nice way to show a friend how you feel about them. I did not see any typos or other grammatical errors. I really liked the poem's flow and the meter. It was very well written and a great read. Write On!

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Review of Media Memoir  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
First of all, I would like to extend my condolences at the passing of your sister. I really enjoyed reading this piece. As I was reading it, it took me through my life and how media progressed as I did. I am somewhat older than you. I grew up in the 60's and so things were pretty primitive compared to today. I did not see any typos or other grammatical errors. I liked the time line that this took and how you would move with the different types of media. Great Read! Write On!

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Review of Polynesia Kiss  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem is very romantic. As I read it, I imagined myself in Hawaii. Although I have never been there It is on my bucket list. The imagery was very vivid. It sounds as if there is a long lost love just aching to be found. I did not see any typos or other grammatical errors. Great Read! Write On!

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This piece confused me. I am not into horror genre and do not read those type of stories. It seemed as if this story was stuck in a whirlpool. There was a beginning but there was no end. The one burning question{pardon the pun} is "Why?" IT seems as if that question was never answered. Maybe that was planned. It was interesting. Write On!

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Review of Muse  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This story left me wondering. Is this set in modern time or in the past. This had my interest throughout. The imagery was fantastic. The scenes in the bookstore made me think of being in a part of my city called Old Town. I cannot walk without assistance and cannot stand for long periods of time. I wish I could do this. But is it safe? Great Read! Write ON!

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Review of SIR TOM THUMBE  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I really liked this and it was very well written. Its imagery was fantastic and it held my interest throughout the whole story. I did not see any typos or other grammatical mistakes. If it was fine with the author, I would like to make a copy of this and show it to my son,WorkInProgress . He would really enjoy this. Write On!

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Review of Waves  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is an interesting way to describe a wave. The imagery is fantastic and powerful. I did not see any typos or other mistakes. This was very well written and I could imagine myself on the lake at my parents' house. It would be a great way to get a tan! Great Read! Write ON!

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Review of You  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This poem is quite deep. It made me wonder if the person that was trying to forget is being abused. There were a few typing mistakes. I did not see any grammatical errors. I often wonder what makes people write pieces like this. It sounds as if the person being abused has resigned herself to her fate. Now that the abuser is gone, she can get on with her life. Very sad. Great Read! Write ON!

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Review of Unsure  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is one of the shortest poems I have ever read. I did not see any typos or other mistakes. What I liked about this is its indecisiveness. Is there a way to expand this and clarify things? Or is that not a possibility? I would say that if you cannot figure out how you feel, you need to take some time. If you are not sure of how he feels, see what he does and how he treats you. Great Read! Write On!

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This piece, to me, can be taken in several ways. At first, I thought it was about an abused person, then possibly a newborn being born. I even thought it was about a child that was lost and trying to find his/her way home. I did not see any typos or other mistakes. My impressions of this is that it is well written, but very vague. YOu may have meant it that way. Great Read! Write On!

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Review of Impossible Peace  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very powerful poem. Especially with the way things are in the world today. As I read this, I thought of how the world would be without any wars or discord. I do not think that is a possibility. People are just too different. That is why there are different religions. That is why people are free thinkers. There are places where this is not the case. That is sad. It is too bad. Great Read! Write On!

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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a very nice story. Are these sisters twins? I wish I had a playmate like thatr when I was growing up. Thee were a few typing mistakes. You capitalized where you should not have. IF you wanted to expand this story, it could be a nice children's story. Great Read! Write On!

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Review of Falling  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow! This is quite powerful. I did not read the prequel to this poem, but this seems harsh. Were yu in a down mood when you wrote this? I did not see any typos or other mistakes. What I liked about the poem is the way you describe how you are trying to relieve yourself of the place you are in. Great Read! Write ON!

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Review of You Were  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is an interesting way to tell a story. It reminded me of how a relationship begins, is in the middle, and its fiery ending. I did not see any typos or other mistakes. I really like the way the last stanza says that the apology was not accepted. Great Read! Write ON!

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