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"Invalid Item" [] by A Guest Visitor Mini-review: An xaxb 9/7 pattern that's a bit hidden by the way it's arranged on the page. Upbeat message that is enhanced by its poetic form. It hasn't been edited so it may be time for a slight edit by reading out loud. For instance I stumble just a bit over the last line "we all belong" because it's one syllable (8 instead of 7) too long. "All belong" (capitalized to emphasize? as in ALL) fits better to my ear. It only matters because this could be sung like a hymn. However that may depend on the tune; it sounds fine when sung to "I'm glad I counted the cost" which is 97.97 D ("Bernal Heights" melody). There are other tunes that might fit as well. I rate it 4.8. Prompt: It asks "Why did God make people different colors?" Why do you think God made people different colors? Frankly? I don't think God had anything to do with our skin color. But if God did then why? doesn't matter. Animals come in all colors. God loves all of creation and embraces all colors. I think God sees the Big Picture. Whatever issues there are it's not with God. Humans divide by size, shape and color. It's a human issue. And God gave us our hearts and brains to get over it. 3.517 |