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A magic wand writes a simple story with my hand. [13+]

I wish I had a magic wand and a magic carpet. And a housekeeper. Yeah, that would be nice. And someone to wake me up in the morning with coffee.

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Writing 4 Kids Contest   (ASR) If you like writing stories and/or poems for kids, this is the contest for you! #1999597 by Cubby

features a magic wand this month of Oktoeberrrr. (Snow flakes next week?)

The trick with a story using a cliche is to make it not cliche. CinderElla has been done. So has HarryP.

What if the magic wand is disguised as a hair brush or a mop (especially if the person in need doesn't like to mop). Or a toy holding a toy wand (hide it in plain sight). Or a pencil, pen, or weird looking stick. If a vacuum cleaner can fly like a broom, what modern item sitting around the room can be used like a wand? Gamers should have a suggestion or two.

The youth or child or unicorn or gorilla handling a wand needn't have the same wish that a middle-aged writer does. Does a bigfoot wish for rain; does a bear wish for snow; does a fairy wish for new wings like a butterfly?

Is the wish granted or does something better happen instead.

Can the wand be used on others but never on oneself or vice versa? Is it alive and true to itself or to the person wielding it.

Remember: simple sentence structure (ix-nay on subordinate clauses); simple words (but a couple new and difficult ones are fine); use all the senses and for sight remember that size and shape and interesting colors matter (anyone who loved their big box of crayons knows what I mean; many kids know their colors!); keep sentences short and simple; get rid of 'is' unless it's a picture book... and even then... action is better ... 'Petra ate the purple pear'; alliteration, rhyme and rhythm can help even in a short story. It's a great tool for memorization.

Most of WDC is middle-class American and seemingly loves to write stories about their own upbringing or fantasies placed in England and Ireland (having never been there). They neglect the child with roots in Jamaica or Pakistan living in Birmingham or Sheffield or the one in Wexford eating her mother's pierogi or the children down the street or on the other side of town who have different names and different dreams. Write for them (but be culturally sensitive). 1880s England and 1950s America have been overdone and frankly, neither reflects 2020s reality. Blue-eyed Sally is a well worn.

If you have children or grandchildren in your life write and read to them. If you don't... borrow some (make sure you give them back)!

It's not like I'm a great storyteller, but I've won this contest a couple times. WDC writers should easily be able to knock me off my pedestal, so have at it. Cubby won't mind if she gets 10-15 entries. With that many there should even be a couple good enough to nominate for a Quill Award.

I'm not saying this is great writing but it was good enough to win 1st place in December 2020 (because you didn't enter!). Note the use of rhythm and rhyme.

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White cow in a red hat  (E) Poem to be read to a child or read by an older child. 18 lines. #2240453 by Kåre Enga in Montana

This was a different type of prompt (first chapter) and an older age group.

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Leather [148]  (ASR) First chapter: Jay dies often. But this death came early and unexpected. #2253270 by Kåre Enga in Montana

A three way tie for first but I'll still cherish it. There were quite a few entries. Notice the age group. One can check on-line. Teddy tested as 4th grade.

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Traveling Teddy  (ASR) The suitcase had survived the storms of the seas, the jostle of rutted roads, the cold... #2245325 by Kåre Enga in Montana

https://readabilityformulas.com/free-readability-formula-tests.php

I checked a sample of text (highlighted in navy above); it tested as 8th-9th grade. This can be helpful if you are writing for a 7 year old or MG or even YA.

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