L'aura del Campo

A plea re reviews/comments

I responded to runningwolf04 but cut and post here instead.

I believe your poll

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refers to prose. Poets want something else.

1. Did you like it?

2. Can you offer any advice to strengthen it poetically.

DO NOT:

3. Correct my grammar/spelling when I'm speaking in dialect.

4. Treat it as if it's a college or grade school essay or report.

ADVICE:

5. If you have never written poetry or are tone-deaf and refuse to read it out-loud, do me a favor... don't review it. Send a comment instead. Comments are welcome.

6. If your only experience is English-only-speaking MidAmerica and my writing isn't... and that offends you or confuses you, don't review. But please leave a comment so I know.

I appreciate comments/reviews by tight-form experts (oriental, short forms) like Tinker or free-flowing (beatnik) verse experts like He’s Brian K Compton. There are others who are experts in their chosen field. My poetic offerings lose to them all the time. But... if you're a novel-writer don't bother lecturing me on haiku... because I know you don't have a clue.

K (as in Cory)

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