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Rated: 13+ · Book · Biographical · #1317094
Enga mellom fjella: where from across the meadow, poems sing from mountains and molehills.
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#1052746 added July 18, 2023 at 6:30am
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Nix it, nexit [63] J6 40w
The off-ramp was blocked by three cop cars and a bull. Randy scowled as he signaled and pulled to the shoulder. No one was moving.

He called the boss.

"Yes, it's on the news. Smile and take the next exit.

62 word original:

The off-ramp was partially hidden by three cop cars and a bull. Randy was not amused as he signaled and pulled to the shoulder. The scowling cops and bull weren't moving.

He was late. He was often late. He called the boss.

"Yes, it's on the news and so are you. Smile and take the next exit. We'll keep the light on."

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