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by Lana
Rated: 18+ · Book · Writing · #1801169
Or just a mind that thinks too much.
#732012 added August 20, 2011 at 2:53am
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Prompt #2
"Death of an Angel" is a piece I am very fond of. I wrote this poem based on a chapter in the novel I am working on.
It was a very hard chapter to write, because I really had to get in the psyche of the character. The tradgedy of losing everything and everyone you love is foreign to me. It was a sad chapter and my favorite so far. Every room she entered someone she loved died before her. I could only imagine how I would feel, and trying to feel her pain was difficult.

"She runs to him now,
In horror, he blazes before her eyes"

These two lines are the most tragic.
To watch the love of your life die in front of you and you can't help is heartbreaking in every way!

I am close to this piece. Not only does it remind me of my struggles writing that chapter, it showed me places within myself I never knew existed.

Hope you like it. And thanks for visiting!


The poem is in my port if you want to check it out.

Until next time. Lana

                   
 Death of an Angel.  (13+)
A poem of love, loss, despair, and a woman fighting through it all. Feedback Wanted!
#1797875 by Lana
 

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