Snow Melt

War Chest Tuesday: Fire Elemental

The July 16, 2013 prompt for "30-Day Blogging Challenge ON HIATUS"  is
"Review" a old piece of yours from your port that you haven't looked at in a while. Has your writing style changed? What have you learned since you wrote that piece? (Be sure to link to it so we know which item you are talking about.)

I wrote "Invalid Item"  on August 2, 2005 and modified it on December 13, 2010. I did not keep a copy of the original, so I do not know how I modified the story. This story is flat and needs more action. There is also redundancy, which is a issues I still deal with even after eight years.

I think my writing has changed a little bit, but I do not think it change as much as I world like. I believe the reason for that is lack or practice in writing stories. I write more poems then stories, so my poems have improved more then my stories. I need to focus on stories because I know I have several syntax and grammar issues..

Maybe I will write a new story about Flicker.

Thought of the Day: "You fail only if you stop writing." - Ray Bradbury