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Warren Pickersgil Memorial Bowling Ball

by Harlow Flick, Right Fielder

Rated: 18+ · Book · Other · #1858907

Poetry collection from Katya's April prompts.

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winklett in the woods

Apr 28, 2024 at 7:43am
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Lovely. As Capp said, I thought the last lines are expansive - and a little haunting.

Cappucine

Apr 28, 2024 at 5:14am
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This rings true with its sense of time & place.

Cappucine

Apr 28, 2024 at 5:12am
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Beautiful poem. I especially love the ending, which expands the poem in a touching way.

Rhyssa

Apr 27, 2024 at 8:06pm
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I love the way you've captured the noise of the birds. I've been caught by them as I leave the house in the morning over the last few weeks. Lovely.

Katya the Poet

Apr 24, 2024 at 7:21am
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The disorientation is wonderful, but probably icky to really go through! I love how the poem gives a sense of the trouble contained in a bubble of care and anesthesia.

Rhyssa

Apr 23, 2024 at 8:38pm
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I love the way you portray that place on the edge of anesthesia--but I'm sorry for the poor patient and hope it was a successful procedure.

winklett in the woods

Apr 22, 2024 at 8:47am
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I love hanging on until the rain, the solace of sleep, and the dreamlike questions.
I have been known to perfectly stride out of step.

Rhyssa

Apr 21, 2024 at 9:44pm
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I love the disconnect in the poem--the out of step and the questions and the ill thoughts for the dead.

Katya the Poet

Apr 21, 2024 at 9:21pm
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Great questions.

I'm hanging on till Thursday, too.

winklett in the woods

Apr 20, 2024 at 9:54am
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I am listening to Pema Chodron right now, which is fitting as she talks about sitting and allowing everything, how thoughts always return and that's okay, to just label them as "thinking" and return to the breath (or in the case of your poem, the brook and its inhabitants). I love your clear and beautiful poem.

#51. self interview
ID #1069118 entered on April 18, 2024 at 7:46pm

#50. strange bird
ID #1031133 entered on April 21, 2022 at 4:02pm

#49. Harlow's 13th nightmare
ID #1030842 entered on April 16, 2022 at 2:30pm

#48. sunshower
ID #1009373 entered on April 30, 2021 at 12:33pm

#47. my resin man
ID #1009184 entered on April 26, 2021 at 6:01pm

#46. Equus
ID #1009019 entered on April 23, 2021 at 5:30pm

#45. i, atheist
ID #1008977 entered on April 22, 2021 at 5:50pm

#44. It’s make-believe, boys
ID #1008409 entered on April 12, 2021 at 4:07pm

#43. No Regrets
ID #1008348 entered on April 19, 2021 at 5:58pm

#42. Star Man
ID #1008194 entered on April 10, 2021 at 7:42pm

#41. gun pussy
ID #1007857 entered on April 6, 2021 at 5:58am

#40. beefcake
ID #1007624 entered on April 2, 2021 at 7:13pm

#39. Punk
ID #1007544 entered on April 1, 2021 at 8:41pm

#38. thread
ID #981552 entered on April 19, 2020 at 6:28pm

#37. Squirrelly
ID #980478 entered on April 7, 2020 at 5:37pm

#36. The Miracle of Google Maps
ID #980237 entered on April 4, 2020 at 4:57pm

#35. A Walk in Fall
ID #980196 entered on April 4, 2020 at 8:26am

#34. Release
ID #957903 entered on April 30, 2019 at 6:46am

#33. Gatling Gun
ID #957758 entered on April 28, 2019 at 2:22pm

#32. Aftermath
ID #957685 entered on April 28, 2019 at 5:08am

#31. Breatharians
ID #957228 entered on July 23, 2019 at 9:10am

#30. dirge in spring
ID #957062 entered on April 20, 2019 at 4:58am

#29. Darkness
ID #956977 entered on April 19, 2019 at 9:38am

#28. Rubble
ID #956730 entered on April 16, 2019 at 8:36am

#27. tilt
ID #956609 entered on April 15, 2019 at 8:30am

#26. Lou Reed
ID #956544 entered on April 14, 2019 at 10:15am

#25. Going Up?
ID #955863 entered on April 5, 2019 at 2:37pm

#24. cuckold dream
ID #955795 entered on April 4, 2019 at 2:55pm

#23. Slippery Rock
ID #910169 entered on April 30, 2017 at 4:22pm

#22. Captive
ID #910022 entered on April 28, 2017 at 1:11pm

#21. DMV
ID #909661 entered on April 22, 2017 at 6:46pm

#20. Personal Banker
ID #909132 entered on April 16, 2017 at 1:40am

#19. super power privilege
ID #909050 entered on April 16, 2017 at 2:01pm

#18. In the Night
ID #908749 entered on April 10, 2017 at 1:00am

#17. Bansky
ID #908722 entered on April 9, 2017 at 5:24pm

#16. Perspective
ID #908592 entered on April 7, 2017 at 4:39pm

#15. Alpha Male
ID #908591 entered on April 7, 2017 at 4:26pm

#14. Snowball in Hell
ID #908369 entered on April 4, 2017 at 5:54pm

#13. My Divorce
ID #908282 entered on April 3, 2017 at 4:53pm

#12. Coal Town
ID #908121 entered on April 1, 2017 at 4:25pm

#11. October
ID #812774 entered on April 6, 2014 at 11:55am

#10. The Revolution Starts Now
ID #812670 entered on April 5, 2014 at 1:07pm

#9. Harlow is Hep
ID #812248 entered on April 2, 2014 at 5:59pm

#8. The Giant Gila Monster
ID #751697 entered on April 26, 2012 at 6:52am

#7. Sixteen
ID #751116 entered on April 17, 2012 at 7:02am

#6. Unlucky
ID #750899 entered on April 13, 2012 at 9:44pm

#5. Visitors to Your Deathbed
ID #750607 entered on April 9, 2012 at 10:13pm

#4. Camping Trip
ID #750366 entered on April 6, 2012 at 8:09pm

#3. graveyard greeter
ID #750146 entered on April 3, 2012 at 5:43pm

#2. Hope
ID #750070 entered on April 2, 2012 at 7:48pm

#1. Boys
ID #750069 entered on April 2, 2012 at 6:11pm

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