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Warren Pickersgil Memorial Bowling Ball

by Harlow Flick, Right Fielder

Rated: 18+ · Book · Other · #1858907

Poetry collection from Katya's April prompts.

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winklett in the woods

Apr 28, 2024 at 7:43am
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Lovely. As Capp said, I thought the last lines are expansive - and a little haunting.

Cappucine

Apr 28, 2024 at 5:14am
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This rings true with its sense of time & place.

Cappucine

Apr 28, 2024 at 5:12am
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Beautiful poem. I especially love the ending, which expands the poem in a touching way.

Rhyssa

Apr 27, 2024 at 8:06pm
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I love the way you've captured the noise of the birds. I've been caught by them as I leave the house in the morning over the last few weeks. Lovely.

Katya the Poet

Apr 24, 2024 at 7:21am
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The disorientation is wonderful, but probably icky to really go through! I love how the poem gives a sense of the trouble contained in a bubble of care and anesthesia.

Rhyssa

Apr 23, 2024 at 8:38pm
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I love the way you portray that place on the edge of anesthesia--but I'm sorry for the poor patient and hope it was a successful procedure.

winklett in the woods

Apr 22, 2024 at 8:47am
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I love hanging on until the rain, the solace of sleep, and the dreamlike questions.
I have been known to perfectly stride out of step.

Rhyssa

Apr 21, 2024 at 9:44pm
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I love the disconnect in the poem--the out of step and the questions and the ill thoughts for the dead.

Katya the Poet

Apr 21, 2024 at 9:21pm
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Great questions.

I'm hanging on till Thursday, too.

winklett in the woods

Apr 20, 2024 at 9:54am
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I am listening to Pema Chodron right now, which is fitting as she talks about sitting and allowing everything, how thoughts always return and that's okay, to just label them as "thinking" and return to the breath (or in the case of your poem, the brook and its inhabitants). I love your clear and beautiful poem.

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