The Lottery was only a story, history shows the reality of when people point at a 'something or someone' and then the stoning starts, as we see it even today in the news.
A great subject to dwell on, when will we learn from it?
I agree, reviewing can be hard. but I thinks its always best to put your full effort, not skip around. Many times I get reviews where the reviewer misses key details, then blames me for poor writing, happens time and time again. Then the few who dont miss that detail, who are paying attention, those are the truly invaluable reviews. The ones I think all of us are looking for. Really insightful post, glad to read it!
I finished my friend's novel. 350 pages. A lot of it was cut. I gave her a short chapter by chapter outline of what a romance novel might look like. It's up to her to decide what she wants in it or left out. I made it about 21-23 chapters which gives enough time to build the story, romance, conflict and then resolution.
I'm not sure if she want's me to write it or her. I hope she starts it. It will help her learn the process of writing, staying on one POV and sticking to the story line.
Now I have to work on the other lady's story and see about getting that done. Her's is writing more emotion and introducing the abuse into it.
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