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A story about secrets, deceit, betrayal, suspense, murder, survival and love. |
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"Kelly" (now Getting Even) is (was) my first short story, now turned novel and is only growing as I go. I've never written before in my life and not just saying that for high praises or sympathy - simply a fact. But man, am I enjoying every minute of it! It's addictive in fact! Worse than any drug, well no that's not true as pretty much every drug is just mind altering and fucks you up. So yes, I'm a newbie on this site, but listen, I've been pretty damn active since I joined the community on the 4th Dec. I've already given over 69 reviews and have received well over 40 reviews myself. Therefore, I'd really, really like you to check out my novel below and review it. Even if you can only do one chapter or just the prologue, it all helps. I know it's long and you probably can't be bothered, but before I delve further into my new found addiction and finish this story, (annoying my wife as I type away in the early hours of the night), I would like to be shown what I'm doing right and what I'm doing wrong. Many thanks and enjoy! :) Read, enjoy and review please!!! :) |
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