I really like this as is but I share some thoughts:
Now go the hell away. Very good use of this line. I'd make it the title unless a specific event or place comes to mind. Like "Workshop, May 32nd, Highway-to-Hell, Nevada".
I'd find active verbs for each use of 'is' and replace each 'the'. Like "May's sky screams blue; Spring's sea blooms green". This provides a season and action, sound, something.
Could use a grammar check unless you like it as is. Grammar is less important in poetry; this isn't an essay. For a definite pause (like for rhythm) you can use an emdash instead of a comma like: "I kid you not — nature's obscene,"
To add "darkness" to it... this is that season...
Explorers with lost souls explore,
Search worlds they've never searched before,
They'll kid you not — forevermore,
Now go the hell away.
Headspace rotate around itself and doubles back to the Past define the future in the present and it all is done for the sanctity the marriage down and sideways acceleration and the distance I see myself like a statue boston time lost in color lost to touch lost to feel sound and the song found in heart found nowhere found to be lost lost to be found words without sound sound without feeling feeling without nerves nerves without and about and a boat the river on the shore and the shower in the ocean honey optional photos life life itself on the Metro of the Giant in the sky of the clouds with its knees bent arms outstretched yes head cocked to one side
A window with curtains here's the vision have an artist sound how's the traffic the coyotes and the cows behind the fence in a country full of farmers with the crickets and the frogs and the smell teasing abusing embarrassing farm Boy who bails it's those it all in the mouth hope the barn in his soul in the brain smother and the Heart little sister and the arm and hands and feet
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