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Write poetry from prompts just for the fun of it; formal or free verse, you pick.
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Oct 1, 2005 at 7:12pm
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Re: #2 dreams: And I can't wake up
by Joy
I can feel the angst in this poem, as if not being able to climb out of a bottomless pit. Very expressive. *Smile*
"I remember as I child dreaming I was awake, realizing I wasn't," At least, you were a child. This still happens to me.
Anyway, I think more stuff happens to me while I dream than at any other time. *Laugh*

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#2 dreams: And I can't wake up · 10-01-05 6:27pm
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