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May 21, 2007 at 3:28pm
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Layers
by 627
Marcia,
Sure, I will link one of my layered stories. It may not be a perfect example, but it's worth a read.

Unsung Hero  (18+)
A disgruntled cynic wakes up as the center of a prophecy in a world of cliches.
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This story started out as a free write one night when I was bored. I did something that Stephen King suggests in his book "On Writing"; I put a character into a situation and wrote him out of it. I had no idea what the plot line was going to be ahead of time. I just put this character into a dark room, gave him a fun voice to work with, and wrote away. I just wrote...with no intentions or ideas. I just went with the flow. Before I knew it, I had a 4,000 word story.

When I looked back on what I had written, I had found some opinions and ideas of mine embedded into the plot. Some were more obvious, some were not. On the surface, it is just a story about an unspectacular man thrown into a spectacular situation. But underneath, the story is really a statement of my opinion on several literary things: hackneyed plots, excessive foreshadowing, plot devices, use of cliches, lack of explanation, etc. Again, it wasn't something I set out to say. But it is a consistent theme that exists as another layer of the story. So this is an example of my unintentional layering. This layer may not be that hidden, but it is another layer nonetheless. I just think it is weird that I didn't notice myself applying it throughout the entire story.
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Layers · 05-11-07 2:08am
by Lori Basiewicz
Re: Layers · 05-11-07 11:49pm
by A Non-Existent User
Re: Re: Layers · 05-16-07 11:04pm
by Lori Basiewicz
Re: Re: Re: Layers · 05-17-07 11:37am
by Marcia Landa
Re: Re: Re: Re: Layers · 05-17-07 12:28pm
by Rebecca Laffar-Smith
Re: Re: Re: Re: Layers · 05-17-07 5:00pm
by Lori Basiewicz
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Layers · 05-17-07 6:12pm
by Marcia Landa
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Layers · 05-19-07 10:57am
by 627
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Layers · 05-21-07 2:59pm
by Marcia Landa
*Star* Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Layers · 05-21-07 3:28pm
by 627
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Layers · 05-22-07 2:52pm
by Lori Basiewicz
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Layers · 05-23-07 12:14am
by 627
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Layers · 05-24-07 12:44pm
by Marcia Landa
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Layers · 05-26-07 9:11pm
by 627
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Layers · 05-27-07 8:20am
by Marcia Landa
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Layers · 05-28-07 10:41pm
by Bernidette
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Layers · 05-28-07 11:15pm
by Lori Basiewicz
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Layers · 05-28-07 11:38pm
by Bernidette

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