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Rated: 13+ · Message Forum · Entertainment · #213819
I've got the words, if you've got the time. Gimme your best Para/Poem.
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Mar 7, 2008 at 2:56am
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Edited: March 7, 2008 at 2:59am
Re: A Monday mornings word
This is another one that seems to me like a lot of fun playing with words, but I'm not getting the message. I feel a heavy weight of depression in it. I can commiserate with the feeling. I don't think a poem needs to be happy or even necessarily hopeful, but ... well, this feels almost like a defeated whine. The wordplay keeps it from falling more forcefully for me.

edit: I missed the word "Monday" in the title here. Makes a lot more sense with that bit of knowledge!


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Everything hangs on words, including ourselves. Often we only learn what we think -- and who we are -- when we write. -- Roger Rosenblatt, Family University Professor in Writing
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A Monday mornings word · 02-25-08 9:27am
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Re: A Monday mornings word · 02-26-08 12:21am
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Re: Re: A Monday mornings word · 02-26-08 6:54am
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*Star* Re: A Monday mornings word · 03-07-08 2:56am
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