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Rated: 13+ · Message Forum · Entertainment · #213819
I've got the words, if you've got the time. Gimme your best Para/Poem.
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Mar 7, 2008 at 3:41am
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Re: A mornings word
So sad!

I like the inner rhyming. This is much more powerful if you drop the "And" at the start of each verse. I don't see where it's needed. I've never seen "ruse" as a verb before, but I like it.



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A mornings word · 03-06-08 7:55am
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