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by Ledan
Rated: E · Message Forum · Reviewing · #1600472
I will review any short story or novel. No deed to pay although I accept donations.
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Dec 31, 2009 at 2:45pm
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Chapter 1: The Flight
I would love a review for my first chapter. Genres it would fall under: Action/Adventure & Dark Fantasy. It is nearly finished, I just need to go back and edit a couple awkward parts. Grammar may be off too. I appreciate your time.

 Chapter 1: The Flight  (13+)
A Duke Assassin on his last assignment is driven from the city into the grips of the Land.
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Chapter 1: The Flight · 12-31-09 2:45pm
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