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by Ledan
Rated: E · Message Forum · Reviewing · #1600472
I will review any short story or novel. No deed to pay although I accept donations.
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Mar 2, 2010 at 5:12am
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Please review 2 chapters of my novel
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 SISCO Chapter 2  (13+)
Agent 'K' - Agent Kilo joins the SISCO team.
#1641286 by ~ Santa Sisco ~


 SISCO Chapter 3  (13+)
The Inauguration - SISCO get their first mission.
#1641287 by ~ Santa Sisco ~


Both are near final form.

It might help to quickly read through chapter 1 to get the whole story ~ But that chapter is final draft; unless you spot a major ?"**? *Smile*

SISCO Chapter 1  (13+)
Carnage - A news reporter finds out about terrorism first hand! (First Draft)
#1641293 by ~ Santa Sisco ~


The genre is Fictional Action/adventure. Spies and terrorists to be precise.

Thank you a million.

I will make a donation after review to reflect your work. *Smile*

I have attached a few points just for taking the time to read them...

Regards,

*Star* Sisco K *Star*

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Please review 2 chapters of my novel · 03-02-10 5:12am
by ~ Santa Sisco ~
Re: Please review 2 chapters of my novel · 04-11-10 10:41pm
by ~ Santa Sisco ~
Re: Please review 2 chapters of my novel · 05-05-10 5:22pm
by Ledan
Re: Re: Please review 2 chapters of my novel · 05-05-10 5:48pm
by ~ Santa Sisco ~

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