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by Ledan
Rated: E · Message Forum · Reviewing · #1600472
I will review any short story or novel. No deed to pay although I accept donations.
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Mar 4, 2010 at 4:40pm
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Love to have you take a look
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This is first draft, so I'm mostly interested in story level review. Thanks

 Moon Spirit  ()
Spirits, cults, magic, swords, and a boy and girl with ancient history slowly unraveling
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Love to have you take a look · 03-04-10 4:40pm
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