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Rated: E · Message Forum · Contest · #1017054
A monthly contest for formal poetry in rhyme and meter.
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Dec 29, 2010 at 1:07pm
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Re: Star Gazing - Rhyming Verse
It is a good poem. You have not mentioned the rhyme and syllabic scheme. It is aabb, 8-8-8-8.

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We hope they’ll be no tears to cry.

>> We hope there’ll be no tears to cry.

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We pray for seasons when we’ll touch,
not minding the hardship so much.

>> You might like to have a re-look at it.

I would rate it as 4.5 stars.

M C Gupta
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Star Gazing - Rhyming Verse · 12-28-10 8:46am
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