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by Ledan
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I will review any short story or novel. No deed to pay although I accept donations.
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Apr 27, 2011 at 8:37am
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by A Non-Existent User
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Hi..


I need some help with my short story. It's the first I've written and any feedback on grmmar, punctuation, theme appreciated.

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Review Request · 04-27-11 8:37am
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