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Nov 3, 2011 at 10:11pm
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Redo: Please, some feedback for my story idea
by A Non-Existent User
So far I have a few titles for my story and its:
"Different Shades of Blue"
"Spring Fever"
"The hummingbird's Servant"
Please comment on these and reply if you have any suggestions, thank you!!!(:

A fourteen year old girl named Ryder struggles through her personality darkening when she is taken from her nice mistress in Boston and dragged to England with a cold man. When she manages to escape, she makes it to Boston but there are a few obstacles again. If she is found, it means death but she is only too willing to risk that possibiliy. She learns the true meaning of freedom and discovers more about herself in her journey than she can ever imagine.

Thank you!(:
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Redo: Please, some feedback for my story idea · 11-03-11 10:11pm
by A Non-Existent User

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