I'm all on that. I'll let you know when I've finished the review!
I'll post the first chapter or so, depending upon how long it is, since I feel reviewing in chunks would be most beneficial at this point. I do want to clarify that some character stuff is a little messed. I won't say what specifically yet, to see if you catch it, but watch out for my description of physical characteristics and let me know if those are too muddy.
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