Dream, I don't make that kind of mistake. I knew when I read your piece last night that it was good. I really liked the twists you made--first to have him ready to poison the well (which makes him totally evil--water isn't something to play with . . . ummm, yeah. I was born in the desert, can you tell?) and then to have him die. It fit.
I wasn't at all surprised when Leger made you one of the winners for that one. Good luck.
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