Story Cafe

Lyra and Jaybird

I accepirate your concerns, but Shoku is the avatar, a immortal being that has mastered bending all four elements. When the world is in times of danger,he must come and save it. The scene I set was merely a pretext, If you want Shoku coming for the quest, then what I will do is , Is that he will come at the inn. Lyra, you remember our first rp story? No one had any problems through that. Maybe I did set the scene a bit too far.

I don't like the look of writing characters that betray. I prefer the villainous sort. What I will do is make Shoku have an apprentice. This apprentice is will betray him. I don't want Shoku written off the thread, please, I would like to keep him.. He will be a special character in this story. Kind of like a magician, an adept. I'll make him come in the inn with his apprentice.

On the other hand, I will be creating two villains. The Marshall is a corrupted man who wants nothing but power, and Mothurn. The grand evil which that wants the grail of immortality. He will use it for special reasons unknown... Would that be ok? Two villains set out to find the grail, while a group of heroes , including Shoku go and search for that grail. But here's a twist for the villains. The two villains don't know each other , so when they come to the grail, what they will find is that everyone wants it.

I'd like it if you would allow me to keep Shoku, and his apprentice, and the two villains.( Though the two villains don't come early, their roles are far later.) For now, I'd like to put them in the inn, Shoku and his apprentice.