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Rated: 18+ · Message Forum · Comedy · #1906319
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Dec 10, 2012 at 10:26pm
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Re: Round 1
by Rhyssa
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as oldest sister
my presents were chosen with
thoughtful care—each one

agonized over
for hours and hours then
wrapped in tinsel and bows

so when I saw the
package for Rhyssa, I winced
inside, hiding pain

at the clever use
of newsprint and twine, wrapping
a picture frame made

not by my sister
but by a kindergarten
friend she’d traded with.
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