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Aug 14, 2013 at 9:20pm
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Re: Entry for 8/14/13: Run, Don't Fly
by depat47
Just a very nice short, short story. I love that it is third person and the child's perspective is just what one would expect from children. Kasey and Mimi are believable little kids.
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Entry for 8/14/13: Run, Don't Fly · 08-14-13 2:13pm
by Lily Bell
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by depat47

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