Noticing Newbies

Hi Jim! Those sound like fun reads. :) As for your question about the eyebrows, lots of things sound too weird before you read them, so I think the answer depends on how well the story is written!
This may be easy to say from a early-twenties perspective, but age is inevitable, right? So why worry about it? Again, easy for me to say, but I really believe it. All it means is you're smarter than me, and as they say, age before beauty. ;)
Good luck with your writing career!