The Originals - Symposium From Topic 1

Review of "February Angel" - I chose this review because the recipient requested the review, responded warmly and enthusiastically when I sent it and used all of my suggestions for editing. Although her response isn't "you made my day" type thing, the fact that she actually used my suggestions, took my feedback seriously and picked up on a technique I have developed and recommended her to use while editing her poem, means a lot more to me than a whole lot of happy excited gratefulness without any changes.

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"Great review. Thank you so much. I hope you don't mind, but I pretty much stole all your edits... I love your meter mapping. That will come in very handy for me. It seems the longer you work on a poem, the better you know it. If you know it well you start forcing the meter and it's hard to figure out what works and where you have just read it that way. The meter mapping will give me a black and white way to check it and eliminate that issue. Very helpful. Thanks so much!"

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