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Jan 21, 2016 at 11:55am
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Re: Review request: Novella
Hi,

I really want to read this, but could you please reformat it with a space between each paragraph. Much easier on the eyes. Not to mention the boost in clarity.

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Review request: Novella · 01-21-16 10:10am
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