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May 14, 2016 at 7:35pm
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I believe you may have reviewed this once before, a long time ago. It has recently undergone a complete rewrite, most especially the opening chapters. I'm hoping they are more believable and representative of Jenny's character.
I believe chapters 1-8 are most ready for review. With that said, reviews of any or all chapters would be greatly appreciated!
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