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Rated: E · Message Forum · Community · #2095917
A place to request in-depth reviews of your novel's opening chapter ONLY. Any genre/rating
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May 16, 2018 at 3:44pm
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Re: Re: Submission
Thank you for your review. I can see where I was telling rather than showing. I will try to correct this.

Also, thank you for your insights and advice; that were very helpful.
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Submission · 10-31-17 3:53am
by Scifiwizard Retired
Re: Submission · 05-16-18 2:43pm
by Christopher Roy Denton
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by Scifiwizard Retired

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