Hello, and thank you for taking a look at my work. This is the start of a new novel I'm writing. I've posted the first five chapters here, and would love to get an opinion of all five, but would still be happy to get feedback on just one chapter.
I'm really keen to see if the characters, the world, and the writing style are compelling enough to keep a reader invested.
Thanks for reading. Please let me know if I can reciprocate a review and take a look at something of yours.
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