It looks like the issue has been addressed and you've got a solid plan now ~ but it might be worth saying that I agree with Robert Waltz that it shows more character development if there's friction in the beginning. One of my pet peeves as a reader is when people get along a little too well.
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that it shows more character development if there's friction in the beginning. One of my pet peeves as a reader is when people get along a little too well.
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