Tobber, thank you for your comments and thank you for spotting those things I missed. It is essential to get a second pair (or more) of eyes to read your stuff because one invariably misses something while editing. Ha! I've cured my habit of spattering the word that through my writing. I now need to do the same with then!
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Ha! I've cured my habit of spattering the word that through my writing. I now need to do the same with then!
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