I don't have much to say about "Stormy Weather, Part 1" and "Stormy Weather, Part 2" It's school drama, and a bit of a delay between action, to set up conflict and skulduggery to exploit. Admittedly, not much is going to come out of it in this branch, but there will be other branches coming off of here where it could get a better development.
Speaking of other possible branches, there are five choices at the end of "Part 2," and a poll to go with them: [Poll completed and deleted]
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