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 Who Is Nneka?  [E]
An explanation of who I am.
by N. M. Barnes
Review of Who Is Nneka?  
Review by jaya
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Nneka

I am truly impressed as I read through your self-portrait. I understand you are human to the core and that's the format for all. you have turned the light towards yourself and it seems that you know who you are and your destiny as well. It is a rare appraisal that a person did for herself. I like the frank assessment of who are and your likes and I am afraid there are hardly any dislikes.
As a mother you had many ups and downs in life and yet you emerge as someone who could be an example of mental strength and forbearance.

your style is good and there are no mistakes to make the reader stumble while reading the article. your sentences flow well. Paragraphs have logical links and that makes the flow uninterrupted.

The last sentence is easily the most impressive. After all, whatever be our race, religion or culture, we are all "God's children."

Thank you for sharing.

Write on!
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