The title and description of this poem hooked me. The first stanza establishes the rhythm, rhyme scheme, and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyme scheme compliment each other and emphasize the poem's main emotions. The main emotions are longing and sadness.

What I liked: This is my favorite line, If not now, then when? If not you, then who? because it require a response from the individual reading the poem.

Technical Problems or Typos: None found.

Suggestions: No suggestions.

This is a well-planned poem that follows the stated form. Write on.



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