The Wages of Sin [18+] "For the wages of sin is death" Romans 6:23 Characters are blackmailed and murdered. |
Dear Vixey Todd , How did I come across your piece? I am reviewing your story as a judge for "What a Character! : Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! This review is done in order to recognize your participation in the contest, as well as for me to read each entry and place my decision in with the others . We thank you for your continued support. I hope you can gather some useful information from the review, even if it is just to find out whether or not I enjoyed reading your piece. Remember, I am but the reader, the story is yours and you alone can decide if anything should be altered. I can merely offer my advice and opinions on what I am reading. My intentions are pure, to never do harm, only offer my view. I felt as if I were in the middle of a game of clue, trying to find the right combination that would tell us who did it and why. This was a cat and mouse game full of deception and lies that concluded with a bang. Very clever indeed. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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