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Review of Thanksgiving  
Review by ~ Aqua ~
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hello, OOT™ ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


*Castlegr* Why I chose to review this work: The title of your poem caught my attention because Thanksgiving is not part of my faith/religion and it is interesting to know and learn about cultures and festivals of others so I wanted to know what kind of a poem you had written on Thanksgiving and what really intrigued me was how you would have written the poem without using the letter 'o.' I thought that it was easy especially because the main things involved in Thanksgiving don't have an O in them, like the turkey, the thanks, the giving but I still wanted to find that out.

*Castleright* First Impression: You have a very nice poem here that was full of light mood and happy vibes. It portrayed an image of thanksgiving in mind that I used to see in movies and stuff so it was good! The reader felt relaxed and enjoyed herself a little as well as you shared a piece of the image of your Thanksgiving with her.

*Castlegr* Imagery and Vocabulary: The vocabulary you have used in your poem was quite strong and effective in conveying and delivering light, fun emotions to the reader as well as painting a nice, happy picture of a huge family gathering who are enjoying the opportunity to talk with each other and drink and eat together, be grateful for all the blessings together. Good times!

*Castleright* Favourite Lines: The third stanza is the one I loved the most from your poem. I really liked the way you had worded the stanza and how the blessings and the memories you made would never be erased with time. Perfect and very beautiful!

*Castle* Final Thoughts: A very nice poem you have here that was free of all typos and errors.

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