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 Snow  [E]
My first attempt at poetry - diatelle.
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Review of Snow  
Review by ~ Aqua ~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello, OOT™ ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


I was searching for something to review from your poetry folder because I had already reviewed most of the work from your stories folder and here I am! The title is really good and that is what dragged me here to read this poem because of all the seasons, winter is my favourite and I love reading winter and nature poems. Another reason why I chose to read and review this work was because I have never seen snow in my life before and I Want to see it as well as play with it. I wanted to know what kind of a poem you had here on snow.

The flow of the poem was good especially at some places. There was no interruption and it flew smoothly when I read it out loud. The vocabulary is well used according to the poem setting and requirement, a type I would call 'fun.' The reader feels really excited and your powerful yet simple vocabulary helped the reader feel a chill when she read about snow in your poem. Then the reader feels nice and warmth of the bright lovely sun and flowers that almost everyone wants to see after a cold winter. It made the reader imagine herself as a young girl who is very excited and giddy to see snow and in the middle of the night, like a thief or a naughty child looking for chocolate, she goes out to find snow everywhere! Your use of the 'big blanket of white' for snow everywhere was simply beautiful! My favourite line from your poem was the "Green grass a welcome sight" I loved it! The way it flew and how you wrote it simple, yet so beautifully expressing everything you needed to!

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