Hello, poet60

What I liked

This was short, sweet and snappy. I liked the anachronistic element and the rhyme.

What might need work

Since you use "instructions", plural in the first line, you should really use the plural form of "to be" I the second line. i.e. are, are very important.

In the third line you use "to" where you mean "too" i.e. To venture too far.

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Thank you for sharing!

Best wishes,

Bob




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