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 Good-bye Despair  [13+]
Prompt "You expected to be sad in the fall."
by Prosperous Snow celebrating
Review of Good-bye Despair  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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The Usual Suspect is not always Kevin Spacey!



What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I gave the prompt in The Writer's Cramp earlier in the week. I was not the judge, but I was interested to read what you writers would do with my prompt.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I like and admire the action of choosing to be happy. I think it is a definite choice when anyone in the world attempts to bring us down. Sometimes, it is easier than others.

Your rhyme is good and your poem flows very well. The words are well chosen and you convey a clear message for your reader, this reader anyway.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part:

"I can no longer live with despair,
I can taste your fear in the air,
Please, for give my self-preservation,
Leaving you is my sanity's salvation."

Sometimes, we have to take an active role in choosing the positive life. I always like it when people write about taking charge of situations that are spiraling out of control, like relationships. That is a hard thing to do, but sometimes a necessary thing for survival.

Well done!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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