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 She is Somebody  [E]
She needs nobody to make her somebody..
by Raksha
Review of She is Somebody  
Review by Angus
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Greetings, Raksha!
This is a nice inspirational piece for people who are looking for higher self-esteem, and I like the style you wrote it in by starting each line with 'somebody'.
Unfortunately, there's a lot of people in this world who don't have enough self-esteem, whether from just being naturally shy or because society has made them that way by looking down on them and/or bullying them around. Sadly, I think in most cases it's the latter.
But I think it's great that you wrote this and you can hold your head up high and be able to love yourself! There's a lot of folks who can't do that, so hopefully they'll see this and be able to love themselves after reading it!
Kee ponw ritin gon, Raksha, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
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