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 |  | The Silent Poetry Collection  [E] A poem that I wrote for a special person who's no longer with us in this life plus more.  |
| (4.5)| THIS REVIEW IS JUST FOR YOU. SAFE TRAVELS & MANY BLESSINGS    I am reviewing your work as a "disABILITY WRITERS GROUP" family member, on behalf of The WDC Army Angels  WHY I'M REVIEWING FOR YOU  Group/purpose: This gift is just for you so you can write with might and gift delight to readers through out WDC with confidence and best ability! Title: The Silent Poetry Collection Description: A poem that I wrote for a special person who's no longer with us in this life plus more.  FIRST IMPRESSIONS  I LIKE What and why: As I read your poem I could feel the depth of your sprint quietly screaming with hope for this troubled world. This story of the plight of this world and the people left living in the streets is a sad reminder of humanities inhumanities to man. Although I can relate to all of this, I hold onto the hope that things can change for the better. You summed up some of the challenges of this world well. plot: The plight of this world and humanity with descriptive details of a girl who at 16 dies in the street is an example of how society has degraded and is a good story to tell in hopes of change for the better. It touched my heart. The character of the girl and humanity seemed to be alive as the events flashed in my mind. Rhythm: Reading your word art was a pleasurable experience. The story moved forward nicely and I felt at ease neither rushed nor straining to get to the next part of the story.  OBSERVATION(S)  QUESTION(S) My guess is that this story in poetry format is based on life experiences or at least things of life which you were familiar with through accounts shared by story telling or other resources. You chose your words very well and carefully. Nad, I suspect that this was created via spiritual impetus, true?  SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS: My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you: What has happened to today's society is really quite sad, this can be quite a stumbling of the tongue sentence at least for me. For me it is easier to read if "today's" is left out, however This does slightly change the impact of this story. Yet, through out history these things in some form or other have continued to happen.  CONCLUSION(S) My thoughts and Impressions: I'm glad you shared this story in poetry form with readers and hove allowed me to review for you. Safe travels and many blessings.  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"  You are being reviewed by "Reviewing Reviewers ~ ON HIATUS" [E]! Feel free to check us out to find out our purpose on Writing.Com. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" The WDC Army Angels  Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 03/27/2018 @ 5:08pm EDT