Good Morning Ray,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

The Lament of the Elder is a unique and inspiring poem for me.

I like your Rhyming scheme in this poem.

There were no distractions throughout your poem which made it more interesting and enjoyable.

Well done at the ending of your poem.

Overall - This poem is a good poem and I do not have any recommendations.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle



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