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 Weakening the Control of Night  [E]
All Myth has a rudiment of fact and uses parable or satire to express it's meaning
by DyrHearte writes
Review by Angus
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, DyrHearte Writes, and happy 18th *Shock2* 'birthday' on here!
This feels a little dark, and I don't mean that to be a pun, even though it came out that way.
I like how you used day and night as brother and sister, and metaphorically, you hit the nail on the head! They are indeed brother and sister, but they're also just as different as night and day! *Bigsmile*
That line about the Father's glorious daughter Day shyly peeking in on brother Night really stood out, as did brother Night's darkness being interrupted by the rising moon!
Bravo, my friend! The mythological analogies were excellent!
Kee ponw ritin gon, DyrHearte, and may you have many more wonderful 'birthdays' on WdC!

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