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I really liked this poem and the way you crafted your words. I like the title and the imaginary as well. Yes,it's not easy to control our emotions. Sometimes clouds and storm prevent us from shinning. It’s so wonderful to see sun shines again. I like the inspirational lines “Get through the fire and you'll begin to see the springs
The springs of freshwater that give you peace." I especially like the last stanza.

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